Woah.. Me and commenting haven't been going together well lately but I'm going to put in a bit of an effort now and try to put into words what I'm feeling in my head~ xD
First of all, even though you didn't quite seem to like it, I was really impressed by the way you took in the prompt. I always thought it would be a more literal prompt (like someone actually saying it like that) but in this fic I could find the general idea of not belonging and going somewhere else to try and find a better life very easily. ^-^ So for that you already get full marks! LoL
Then there's the story itself and the ability you gave Sungmin which is pretty much making him pull out his hair in annoyance. Ahh, it was a really cool idea to come up with, and I loved the way Hyukjae kind of wriggled himself into Sungmin's life, not taking a get out for an answer. ^-^ It was nice to see him being so cool and composed in this fic as usually people make Hyukjae the confused one and someone else the one helping him. So this was a nice change to that. And also, like someone above already mentioned, you did a really good job at describing Sungmin's inner turmoil about his new ability, his parents and everything~ :D
Thank you so much for this, it was a really nice read and I enjoyed it thoroughly :D
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First of all, even though you didn't quite seem to like it, I was really impressed by the way you took in the prompt. I always thought it would be a more literal prompt (like someone actually saying it like that) but in this fic I could find the general idea of not belonging and going somewhere else to try and find a better life very easily. ^-^ So for that you already get full marks! LoL
Then there's the story itself and the ability you gave Sungmin which is pretty much making him pull out his hair in annoyance. Ahh, it was a really cool idea to come up with, and I loved the way Hyukjae kind of wriggled himself into Sungmin's life, not taking a get out for an answer. ^-^ It was nice to see him being so cool and composed in this fic as usually people make Hyukjae the confused one and someone else the one helping him. So this was a nice change to that. And also, like someone above already mentioned, you did a really good job at describing Sungmin's inner turmoil about his new ability, his parents and everything~ :D
Thank you so much for this, it was a really nice read and I enjoyed it thoroughly :D